15 May 2014

Of Grace And Elegance


She whisked by him, in the arms of her partner, and again he knew.
She was otherworldly--such grace and elegance another creature could not behold. Her laugh made the stars shine brighter and her eyes smiled even when she was frowning. With every step she took, dancing and laughing, he fell a little more.
When those deep green eyes of her's glanced at her partner all he could feel was his heart burning. ''Excuse me, excuse me,'' he murmured, stepping past the whirling couples and stopping in front of her.
''May I have this dance?''

17 comments:

  1. This is beautiful! I love it! <3

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    1. Thank you so much Rachel! That means a lot coming from you; I adore all your stories!

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  2. I just LOVE this. It's beautiful. Thank you for the kind words on my blog, they were lovely!
    -Your new follower :D

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    1. You're welcome, and thank you so much for following me! You were my ninety-ith follower, ahh! :)

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  3. I haven't read something so amazing in a very long time. Beautiful ^_^

    -Nymisha
    http://ndwrjournal.blogspot.in/

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  4. Love love love this! *looooong happy sigh* ;)
    xo,
    -Anna <3
    www.bananaandbear.blogspot.com

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    1. Aww, haha! Thank you, you are so kind!

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  5. Gorgeous piece of writing, you lovely girl♥
    Tane♥♥♥
    tangerinetane.blogspot.com

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    1. Thank you! You always leave the nicest comments <3

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  6. O..m..D..
    You're v. talented! Beautiful piece of writing. Really captured the moment.


    http://freetobrd.blogspot.co.uk/?m=1

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  7. Aw! So romantic! I wish someone would see me like that, except that I'm not graceful XD

    www.whimsicalyoungster.blogspot.com

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p.s. you're looking fab today.