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15 May 2014

Of Grace And Elegance


She whisked by him, in the arms of her partner, and again he knew.
She was otherworldly--such grace and elegance another creature could not behold. Her laugh made the stars shine brighter and her eyes smiled even when she was frowning. With every step she took, dancing and laughing, he fell a little more.
When those deep green eyes of her's glanced at her partner all he could feel was his heart burning. ''Excuse me, excuse me,'' he murmured, stepping past the whirling couples and stopping in front of her.
''May I have this dance?''
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17 comments:

  1. Rachel May 16, 2014 at 7:47 AM

    This is beautiful! I love it! <3

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    1. MadelineMay 18, 2014 at 11:05 AM

      Thank you so much Rachel! That means a lot coming from you; I adore all your stories!

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  2. NesrynMay 16, 2014 at 10:37 AM

    I just LOVE this. It's beautiful. Thank you for the kind words on my blog, they were lovely!
    -Your new follower :D

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    1. MadelineMay 18, 2014 at 11:06 AM

      You're welcome, and thank you so much for following me! You were my ninety-ith follower, ahh! :)

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  3. CindyMay 16, 2014 at 12:19 PM

    Breathtaking <3

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  4. Brooke JordanMay 17, 2014 at 8:05 AM

    Flawless <3
    xoxo,
    Brooke

    Silver Linings

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  5. nymishaMay 18, 2014 at 4:35 AM

    I haven't read something so amazing in a very long time. Beautiful ^_^

    -Nymisha
    http://ndwrjournal.blogspot.in/

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  6. Anna ElisabethMay 18, 2014 at 10:42 AM

    Love love love this! *looooong happy sigh* ;)
    xo,
    -Anna <3
    www.bananaandbear.blogspot.com

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  7. Tane HannahMay 20, 2014 at 5:11 AM

    Gorgeous piece of writing, you lovely girl♥
    Tane♥♥♥
    tangerinetane.blogspot.com

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    1. MadelineMay 20, 2014 at 10:31 AM

      Thank you! You always leave the nicest comments <3

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  8. UnknownMay 20, 2014 at 8:13 AM

    O..m..D..
    You're v. talented! Beautiful piece of writing. Really captured the moment.


    http://freetobrd.blogspot.co.uk/?m=1

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  9. UnknownJuly 20, 2014 at 3:29 AM

    Aw! So romantic! I wish someone would see me like that, except that I'm not graceful XD

    www.whimsicalyoungster.blogspot.com

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Please be nice and respectful to each other.

xoxo

p.s. you're looking fab today.

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